Brock,
David James. Ten-Headed Alien.
Hamilton: Buckrider Books, 2018. (ISBN # 978 1 928088
55 4). 93 pp.
As a reader, you might come to David
James Brock’s second collection of poems, Ten-Headed
Aliens, feeling a bit discombobulated at first. You don’t just ‘read’ the
poems, but need to read and then re-read, spelunking about in your mind for
mythic, pop culture, literary, political, theatrical, musical, and cinematic
allusions. You need to sink in, let yourself steep in the poems a bit, before
they begin to slowly unswirl and reveal themselves to
you.
Divided into three sections, Prog I,
Grunge, and Prog II: Ten-Headed Alien, this collection is reminiscent of the
way in which a jellyfish might move through the water: the poems seem to
expand, then shrink, then expand again, moving with the current or any slight
ripple. Just when you think you’ve sorted it out, the jellyfish moves again,
and you’re trying to find a place to anchor yourself. Some might find this
frustrating, but I found it fascinating. There’s a layering in the work,
throughout all three sections, that invites the reader to take an active part
in how the poems unveil themselves. There’s a dissonance here that unsettles,
but which is, at the same time, also terribly seductive. Reading Ten-Headed Alien becomes a collaborative
effort between the reader and the text, a cerebral challenge, and then a reward
when you complete the book and want to return to the beginning—to begin again,
anew.
In the pacing of the stanzas and in
the almost frantically styled enjambment of the lines, there is an underlying frisson
of anxiety that weaves itself through the book. Brock is very good at wielding
allusions to prog rock, art, theatre, literature, music, and then equally clever
at pulling in the reader, then spinning them out again in a kind of mad, Tim
Burton-esque sort of waltz. In the first poem, “Tell
Me What to Do (Now that I’m Awake),” the poet sets the pace for the work. He
uses repetition and echo throughout, linking images to one another with a deft
hand. “Tell me where to watch tonight’s moon set from a sober white cliff”
slides cleverly into the next line, “Waxing.
Waning. Gibbous. Billy Gibbons.” You feel almost as if you are following
him through the book, as if he’s leading you forward, encouraging, but also
challenging you to take part. You simply can’t be a bystander when you read
this poetry; it engages on many levels, most of which are cerebral at first,
but then deeply emotional underneath.
Loss shows up in “balloon Balloon BALLOON,” reveals itself
in a countdown that is reflected in the structure of the stanzas. The character
of ‘robot’ is embedded in this piece, but there’s something so not robotic
about the final few lines: “She reads loss as blue balloons on the moon,
planted by the astronaut/who didn’t make it home./She reads loss as a field of
blue looking for wind./Loss as a lonely spaceman on moon prairie, singing
anthems of/one-way trips.” There’s such great beauty here, in the imagery, and
in the way the poignant tone catches you off guard as Brock juxtaposes the
notion of a robot with an emotion. It’s sharply crafted, zinging with contrast.
Mythological references abound.
You’ll find Narcissus and Echo hanging out in a bar in “Narcissus, Shiny Bar,
Echo.” Just when you think it might get a bit heavy, Brock uses humour to
lighten it all. He describes the two in a quirky vignette: “The bar top/is
scuffed from similar moments of self-reflection--/knocked on by rings and watches,
carved by Camaro keys.” Then, it’s followed up with these haunting lines: “Somehow
the past always divines an empty stool in/a dark bar,” and later, the poem
completes itself with the idea that “a mirror between them breaks by new roots,/and a trunk thrust up through bottles and dust.”
Well-known myths shapeshift, remake themselves in postmodern ways that are
quirky and whimsical, but then pull you back into some kind
of beauty.
In
“Someone is Always Telling You Not to Worry,” a too busy head and anxiety make
themselves known: “It happens anyway, these worries. Asteroids miss/the Earth
by parsecs sometimes. Predictions/for the end of the world are fifty-fifty.”
It’s that dry wit of a voice that offers a bit of humour and levity to the
collection. It’s that voice that lightens and brightens when things might seem
to get a bit weighty.
The
final, titular section is complex and impressive in its scope. Poetic sequences
may or may not always work. This one does. The ten heads of an imagined alien
are reflections of voice, trees, oceans, fresh water, beauty, war, thought,
emotion, action, and diplomacy. They are paired with constellation poems.
There’s a conversational weaving and braiding between pieces here. Everything
seems, at first, rooted in myth and origin, and then finds itself shattered in
a future that is painted in bleak shades. There are ruins, and a sad knowledge
that so much has been needlessly lost. The whole section feels like a heart
ache at the end, but then you know you need to read it again. For me, that
means that Ten Headed Alien is a good
collection, that Brock has woven a complex tapestry which offers a sense of
great depth and fulfilment if you enter into it as an
active reader (and lover) of poetry.
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Kim Fahner was the fourth poet laureate of the City of Greater
Sudbury (2016-18), and also the first woman to be
appointed to the role. Kim has published four volumes of poetry, including her
latest, Some Other Sky (Black Moss Press, 2017). Her play, Sparrows Over Slag,
had a staged reading at PlaySmelter New Work Theatre
Festival (in collaboration with Pat the Dog Theatre Creation), in May 2018 at
the Sudbury Theatre Centre. She is currently working on her second novel and
completing a play-in-progress. She is a member of the League of Canadian Poets,
the Writers’ Union of Canada, and PEN Canada. She blogs at The Republic of
Poetry at kimfahner.wordpress.com. Her website is www.kimfahner.com